You did a very good job of showing the feelings of suspense and drama through your summaries; i actually felt a little of the pressure that the characters were experiencing just through reading your blog.
I also could definitely hear the voice of TT coming through when you were doing some of your reflections, such as for DBATB.
The only thing i can nitpick at is to sometimes bring out your feelings a little more on reflections, and maybe make some predictions, describe what you would have liked to have seen happen, etc. in other words, go into a smidgen more detail.
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You did a very good job of showing the feelings of suspense and drama through your summaries; i actually felt a little of the pressure that the characters were experiencing just through reading your blog.
I also could definitely hear the voice of TT coming through when you were doing some of your reflections, such as for DBATB.
The only thing i can nitpick at is to sometimes bring out your feelings a little more on reflections, and maybe make some predictions, describe what you would have liked to have seen happen, etc. in other words, go into a smidgen more detail.
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